Comments on: The Dating Game http://www.delenemartin.com/2009/07/04/the-dating-game/ The Third Place of Dee Martin Wed, 01 Feb 2012 02:51:09 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: gypsy http://www.delenemartin.com/2009/07/04/the-dating-game/comment-page-1/#comment-136263 gypsy Wed, 22 Jul 2009 07:20:59 +0000 http://www.delenemartin.com/?p=952#comment-136263 came here from Rebecca's blog... what a twist and the flow of the story was very nice, just took me along... TC came here from Rebecca’s blog…

what a twist and the flow of the story was very nice, just took me along…

TC

]]> By: Susan Helene Gottfried http://www.delenemartin.com/2009/07/04/the-dating-game/comment-page-1/#comment-136053 Susan Helene Gottfried Fri, 17 Jul 2009 15:39:12 +0000 http://www.delenemartin.com/?p=952#comment-136053 Oops. I've had this screen open for eons and forgot about it! That, of course, meant I got to start reading all over again from the beginning. I gotta say, this is as good, if not better, than the fiction I read at Everyday Fiction. You should start submitting! Oops. I’ve had this screen open for eons and forgot about it! That, of course, meant I got to start reading all over again from the beginning.

I gotta say, this is as good, if not better, than the fiction I read at Everyday Fiction. You should start submitting!

]]> By: Jane Doe http://www.delenemartin.com/2009/07/04/the-dating-game/comment-page-1/#comment-135721 Jane Doe Thu, 09 Jul 2009 21:11:07 +0000 http://www.delenemartin.com/?p=952#comment-135721 Wonderfully descriptive. Your two characters, especially the woman, are very well done, especially for such a short piece. The story progresses so normally and then we're suddenly hit with the fact that her date isn't human, a great twist. Wonderfully descriptive. Your two characters, especially the woman, are very well done, especially for such a short piece. The story progresses so normally and then we’re suddenly hit with the fact that her date isn’t human, a great twist.

]]> By: Naraa Malone http://www.delenemartin.com/2009/07/04/the-dating-game/comment-page-1/#comment-135719 Naraa Malone Thu, 09 Jul 2009 20:16:36 +0000 http://www.delenemartin.com/?p=952#comment-135719 Laughing. I didn't see that coming. I like surprises on the page, but not on dates. Laughing. I didn’t see that coming. I like surprises on the page, but not on dates.

]]> By: John Tran http://www.delenemartin.com/2009/07/04/the-dating-game/comment-page-1/#comment-135711 John Tran Thu, 09 Jul 2009 13:12:36 +0000 http://www.delenemartin.com/?p=952#comment-135711 Hello Dee, Very nicely done! I had a feeling early on something was about to happen - everything was just too rosy at the beginning. :) I didn't expect the ending though. (Btw, thanks for visiting my blog) Cheers, John. Hello Dee,

Very nicely done! I had a feeling early on something was about to happen – everything was just too rosy at the beginning. :) I didn’t expect the ending though.

(Btw, thanks for visiting my blog)

Cheers,
John.

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