Comments on: The Core http://www.delenemartin.com/2009/08/30/the-core/ The Third Place of Dee Martin Wed, 01 Feb 2012 02:51:09 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: totomai http://www.delenemartin.com/2009/08/30/the-core/comment-page-1/#comment-137110 totomai Wed, 02 Sep 2009 13:09:18 +0000 http://www.delenemartin.com/?p=1152#comment-137110 absolutely lovely, a teasing poem :-) absolutely lovely, a teasing poem :-)

]]> By: Dee http://www.delenemartin.com/2009/08/30/the-core/comment-page-1/#comment-137074 Dee Mon, 31 Aug 2009 10:38:17 +0000 http://www.delenemartin.com/?p=1152#comment-137074 Miss A - I have many teachers here, but the education ain't always free. Sometimes something slips by the post and I realize I have told something more than I meant. There is a beauty in that stream of consciousness stuff but a danger too. Things slip by and the publish button is pushed before you look in the mirror and see that your skirt was tucked up in your pantyhose in the back and your drawers were showing. I liked this when I wrote it and read it again later and it hurt. Jeeves and Swapna - thank you so much.. Present - amen. Miss A – I have many teachers here, but the education ain’t always free. Sometimes something slips by the post and I realize I have told something more than I meant. There is a beauty in that stream of consciousness stuff but a danger too. Things slip by and the publish button is pushed before you look in the mirror and see that your skirt was tucked up in your pantyhose in the back and your drawers were showing. I liked this when I wrote it and read it again later and it hurt.

Jeeves and Swapna – thank you so much..

Present – amen.

]]> By: swapna http://www.delenemartin.com/2009/08/30/the-core/comment-page-1/#comment-137072 swapna Mon, 31 Aug 2009 05:43:08 +0000 http://www.delenemartin.com/?p=1152#comment-137072 "you ain’t touching it, you couldn’t not in a million tries"....beautifully said! “you ain’t touching it, you couldn’t
not in a million tries”….beautifully said!

]]> By: present http://www.delenemartin.com/2009/08/30/the-core/comment-page-1/#comment-137071 present Mon, 31 Aug 2009 05:21:15 +0000 http://www.delenemartin.com/?p=1152#comment-137071 Lovely poem. That last line, "like a stream direction changes but the water still flows where it will" makes me think that the glimpse can mislead us. We may think we've seen what defines someone, when actually the peek doesn't even begin to reveal what or who someone is. Lovely poem. That last line,
“like a stream
direction changes
but the water still flows where it will”
makes me think that the glimpse can mislead us. We may think we’ve seen what defines someone, when actually the peek doesn’t even begin to reveal what or who someone is.

]]> By: Jeeves http://www.delenemartin.com/2009/08/30/the-core/comment-page-1/#comment-137070 Jeeves Mon, 31 Aug 2009 04:17:05 +0000 http://www.delenemartin.com/?p=1152#comment-137070 This is one of your best!!And I simply love it..... This is one of your best!!And I simply love it…..

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