Comments on: The Core http://www.delenemartin.com/2009/08/30/the-core/ The Third Place of Dee Martin Thu, 09 Sep 2010 11:03:20 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: totomai http://www.delenemartin.com/2009/08/30/the-core/comment-page-1/#comment-137110 totomai Wed, 02 Sep 2009 13:09:18 +0000 http://www.delenemartin.com/?p=1152#comment-137110 absolutely lovely, a teasing poem :-) absolutely lovely, a teasing poem :-)

]]> By: Nairobi http://www.delenemartin.com/2009/08/30/the-core/comment-page-1/#comment-137100 Nairobi Tue, 01 Sep 2009 23:40:50 +0000 http://www.delenemartin.com/?p=1152#comment-137100 I truly loved reading this.... Like these lines the most: All you get a glimpse, a peek, a hint like a stream direction changes but the water still flows where it will Keep writing! http://songofsea.wordpress.com/2009/09/01/a-mad-mad-world/ I truly loved reading this….

Like these lines the most:

All you get
a glimpse, a peek, a hint
like a stream
direction changes
but the water still flows where it will

Keep writing!

http://songofsea.wordpress.com/2009/09/01/a-mad-mad-world/

]]> By: Dee http://www.delenemartin.com/2009/08/30/the-core/comment-page-1/#comment-137074 Dee Mon, 31 Aug 2009 10:38:17 +0000 http://www.delenemartin.com/?p=1152#comment-137074 Miss A - I have many teachers here, but the education ain't always free. Sometimes something slips by the post and I realize I have told something more than I meant. There is a beauty in that stream of consciousness stuff but a danger too. Things slip by and the publish button is pushed before you look in the mirror and see that your skirt was tucked up in your pantyhose in the back and your drawers were showing. I liked this when I wrote it and read it again later and it hurt. Jeeves and Swapna - thank you so much.. Present - amen. Miss A – I have many teachers here, but the education ain’t always free. Sometimes something slips by the post and I realize I have told something more than I meant. There is a beauty in that stream of consciousness stuff but a danger too. Things slip by and the publish button is pushed before you look in the mirror and see that your skirt was tucked up in your pantyhose in the back and your drawers were showing. I liked this when I wrote it and read it again later and it hurt.

Jeeves and Swapna – thank you so much..

Present – amen.

]]> By: swapna http://www.delenemartin.com/2009/08/30/the-core/comment-page-1/#comment-137072 swapna Mon, 31 Aug 2009 05:43:08 +0000 http://www.delenemartin.com/?p=1152#comment-137072 "you ain’t touching it, you couldn’t not in a million tries"....beautifully said! “you ain’t touching it, you couldn’t
not in a million tries”….beautifully said!

]]> By: present http://www.delenemartin.com/2009/08/30/the-core/comment-page-1/#comment-137071 present Mon, 31 Aug 2009 05:21:15 +0000 http://www.delenemartin.com/?p=1152#comment-137071 Lovely poem. That last line, "like a stream direction changes but the water still flows where it will" makes me think that the glimpse can mislead us. We may think we've seen what defines someone, when actually the peek doesn't even begin to reveal what or who someone is. Lovely poem. That last line,
“like a stream
direction changes
but the water still flows where it will”
makes me think that the glimpse can mislead us. We may think we’ve seen what defines someone, when actually the peek doesn’t even begin to reveal what or who someone is.

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