3 Word Wednesday CCIV: break negative surface
the skin bleeds but
bones don’t break
it’s only surface pain
don’t let negative
touch the center
open up the vein
life is never
chocolate covered
melting in the rain
hearts muscle
keeps beating
captive in chains
wonderful rhythms and beautiful sounds; I enjoyed the rhyme you’ve got going, too… very nice
thanks Anno – not sure about the title though 🙂
Oh, Dee, this totally touches me… I’m feeling very much like chocolate left in the rain today. Thanks. I needed the infusion of strength.
Great lines in this, Dee. And I think the title is just fine. The chocolate in the rain line is my very favorite. I saw it immediately in my mind’s eye.
Thanks Thom – hope plans for the move are going smoothly.