Totally Optional Prompts offered color for inspiration and it had been sitting in the back of my mind for a couple of days and Sunday Scribblings prompt is New in honor of Laini who is anxiously awaiting the birth of her baby. One Word Prompt: Geese
Simon was slowly regaining his health.Â Word had spread in the valley that he had returned and soon folks would “pass by” to get a glimpse.Â As he got stronger he would take his staff and wander around his house in the afternoon sun.Â He would rest when he was tired and as he sat on a bench in front of his house the children came and sat around him and begged for stories.
“Shh” he said with his finger to his lips and a twinkle in his eyes.Â “If you get still I will tell you how our valley came to be so beautiful”.Â The children scooted up closer and waited expectantly.
Once a beautiful lady lived in a house at the end of the lane.Â She had magic that caused animals to be friendly and she loved this valley more than anything.Â One day, he began…
“Tsk Tsk, this will never do.” she said as she stepped out on the porch.Â The vista before her was all black and white and gun metal gray.Â She picked up her box of supplies and walked into the scene.Â On one side of her walked a lion and on the other a lamb.
She reached into the box and drew out her favorite brushes and began to paint.Â She took blue and white and mixed the perfect shade of sky andÂ using wide strokes, applied light and air and wispy swirls of cloud. She took a tiny detail brush and with just a few flicks, birds wheeled and twirled.Â “That’s better.” she thought.Â Fine lines in the distance and suddenly geese flew in formation. The lion swished his tail and she nodded and smiled, “you’re right, we need to plan for morning and night.” and she added bright orange and deep rose in the west for the sunset to find and midnight blue so the night would have a place to hang the moon and stars. Lavender and pink blended in the east to invite the sun to rise.
The lamb nudged her with it’s nose and she nodded in agreement. She dipped her fan brush in the forest green and painted in towering pines, dabbing with black and gold for shadow and light, little brown pine cones to finish them off.Â Now for some oaks and elms.Â Bushes and shrubs and grasses to cover the earth and give the smaller animals something to nibble on.Â She looked around at her work and was happy.
She took browns and golds and reds and gave the dreary houses clothing that warmed them and made yellow light to spill out of windows with blue curtains waving in the breeze.
“That’s so much better.” she told the lion andÂ lamb.Â One last thing to be done.Â She took her pen and drew loving and peaceful words over the first house and an angry argument ended.Â Lullaby lyrics written into the next house and a fussy babe slept.Â A poem from the street and the an artist sitting at his desk began to write.
She turned and as she wandered back to her home she sang softly and tree branches sighed in the wind, birds sang, and insects spoke of the changing seasons.Â Her supply box was lighter and so was her step.Â She reached her porch and set the box down and settled into her rocking chair.Â Her friends curled on the porch at her feet, sleeping peacefully.Â The gray was still there, but love had painted over it with beauty and the world was new with magic.
She grew sleepy and as she dozed, the shadows grew longer and night fell.Â The darkness was so jealous of the colors she brought that it locked her in the moon and that’s where she lives to this day.
The children all clapped and didn’t notice the sadness in Simon’s eyes when he finished the tale.Â “Go home children, your mothers will be calling you for supper.” he told them and stiffly got to his feet.Â The children wandered home calling out goodbyes as they went.Â They would look out their windows in wonder that night.Â They would dream of a beautiful woman looking down on them smiling over her valley.
Magic writing. Oh how i wish I was such an artist. But… to be imprisoned in the moon?
That was beautiful, and so magical. Loved it.
loved it. I always thought it was the man in the moon. I guess I have been to “macho”. I stand corrected and mesmerized by your story. enjoyed it
Make that 4 for 4. I’m with the others. Magic.
Great work! I love how you were able to make the different prompts work together to form such a beautiful story.
what a fun tale 🙂
a magical tale. that last imagery hits me. about his sadness left unnoticed..
That was pure magic. Thank you. Gorgeous.
This is just magical! Beautiful writing!
Wow! That was the type of story told by tribal elders. Full of wonder and magic that is life. Truly wonderful, Dee!
The inside of the moon must be very colorful, indeed.
I love this, Dee. It really has the storyteller quality to it.
Thank you everyone for your comments. I enjoyed writing this more than anything else I’ve ever written.