She’s Come Undone

Fiction In 58 and One Word prompt: collapse

She built her case, brick by evidentiary brick, documented in triplicate, what was once called iron-clad.  He searched for loopholes and shimmied in and out as he pleased.  She had it wrapped up, tied up in a bow, buttoned down.  He was free and easy, breezing through the front door and out the back when it all collapsed.

2 thoughts on “She’s Come Undone

  1. missalister

    I picture Mr. Free’n’easy breezing through that tidy bow and leaving it like a tornado leaves a trailer park LOL! You do a nice 58, Dee. Giving our man Thommy G a run for his money!

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